she had languished
nearly submerged
semi-conscious
in the skin-pruning depths
of the deepest dank well
clinging with full tenacity
achieving uprightness
in incremental measure
nostrils hovering
barely clearing
oily-scummed surface
in fits and starts
she slithered and clawed
wedging toes
scrabbling fingertips
ignoring the slough of dermis
fighting swamping suck
of shame
that feeds night creatures
from her putrified detritus
quivering in exertion
infinitesimal rising
climb, arduous and wearying
beneath shredded digits
stoned grips dry
slime drips off
truth stretches her limbs
stench thins
diluting its nasal infiltration
above, the rocky lip
backlit tantalizing
beckoning daylight
zenith surfaces, as does she
(image: Wikipedia, artist Jean Leon-Gerome)
Kick ass! I’ll belay for you if you need help climbing higher.
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Thanks
You might need a face mask. It was smelly down there
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It’s fine. “Nurse nose” = nothing is smelly except for C-Diff.
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Got it.
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Great image to match the words (or is it the other way round?), well done
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Words were first. And yes I was excited to find that picture 😉
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Reblogged this on Whisper and the Roar and commented:
Aurora Phoenix/Insights from “Inside”
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Thank you! I am honored 😉
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Pretty fucking good is honestly what crossed my mind while reading.
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Thank you Christine! That says so much, especially from you
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I am a fan!
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Thanks!
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Jesis, you are an amazing writer. I mean… fantastic. Sometimes my silly word musings blush and hide behind bushes to avoid reporters asking them why they aren’t as good as your posts.
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I’m pretty sure those reporters work for the national enquirer
Hacks!!
Thank you
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I’m a huge fan. 🙂
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*but not a ‘yuge’ fan
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Omg thank God!
I figured this out. Those reporters are looking for UFO stories and your writing is out of this world 😉
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No YOU’RE out of this world. 🙂
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How about we are both shooting stars?
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I think we have an agreement. 🙂
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👌 awesome 🤗
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Don’t you know that you are a shooting star?
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And all the world will love you just as long as, as long as you are
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Bad company til the day I die
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Destiny is the rising sun
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Six gun sound is our claim to fame
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