in the beginning, there was despair
she was transported on an asp ride
urging wide-eyed virgins, “take just a wee sip, dear
and this desert will be transformed into a magic spa ride
and you will catch sea drip of dazzling diamante”
the virgins, deflowered and despondent, walked off the sad pier
conforming to dictums said per ancient histrionic tomes
“it was not I” rasped the serpent
continuing to rape ids, innumerable
in the garden where peas rid honeybees of suckle
fruit of the trees stank, putrid of dire sap
as pride goeth before all falls
cherubs succumbed to ads ripe with falsehoods
veracity rattled as it went to die, rasp whittling bones
beyond the hurtling vengeance the air sped, cyclonic
demonic forces unleashed swords to pare ids from rotten cores
the goddess, astounded, parsed “I alone will survive destruction”
beseeching mistaken provenance, creatures responded “si, padre”
Phoenix, winging aloft, turns an ear, dips and banks
attending to lost inner souls who aspired to redemption
lifts the fallen masses from despondency, praised eloquently
(image: Etsy)
Wow!!
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Thanks! 😉
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This is great!
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Thank you! I appreciate it
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I am impressed so much by this! I read it in subscriptions first, without the emphasis, and thought “well there’s a poem I could never have written”. Then I read it on your page, and saw the clever anagrams. Amazing!
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Oh thank you. I had a little helper with the anagrams. Question is, did you figure out the title?
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Not yet
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Look at the tags for a hint😉
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Alas, cannot see tags on my phone.
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Ah bummer. So do you want the hint or remain in suspense? (Not that it’s really suspenseful LoL)
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At notable soul ship? I may have that wrong. I did it the hard way, in my head.
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Alphabet solutions.
You are incredibly clever!
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Meh, not really
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Yes really
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I’m okay
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Modest I see
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No, I’m not as clever as I could be.
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Well if you were too much cleverer you would be the cleverest
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Mt. Cleverest?
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Hmmm….. That implies climbing? Or peaks? Peeks? Piques?
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Picts? Sherpas
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They climb well, yes.
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To the heights of the heralayas
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Oh, the interpretations of heralayas… Has so many layas. With heights on top.
That was clear, right? Lol
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Avalanches of analysis
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Landslides of lab work
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Torrents of tests
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Earthquakes of empirical evidence
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Cyclones of confirmatory caveats
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Fog of frequent floccinaucinihilipilification
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