Inspired by the introductory post by A, G Diedericks on Sudden Denouement. Please be sure to read his brilliant writing.
you drowned in the well
incognizant, I dug
I was tunneling
to the dawn of us
through the purgatory
of your distance
my shovel struck bedrock
immutable, unyielding
flinty faux foundation
fossilized connection
deflected, I excavated
askew
tapped a hole
in the banks of Styx
inundated our
sacred rooms
I drowned in the well
unwitting, you unearthed
you were scrambling
for safety
craving concealment
hunted wolf cub
covering its scat
you sought burrowed refuge
tang of your fear
hung heavy on my tongue
frantic scrabbling
furrowed a pit
your sorrows swelled
rivulets to raging
unheeding I fell
over the brink
our dawn
was a golden reveille
an estival serenade
summons to rapturous
dispelling of vernal chill
from glittering gems of dew
our dusk plummeted precipitously
arctic dirge
to autumnal hurricanes
Abaddon escorts
to hibernal frigidity
dark, unconscionably soon
fell between me and you
The Godfather 2 proved that some sequels can outdo the original. This is proof of that! An exhilarating read from start to finish.. So palpable..I felt the spiritual connection between the pieces. Thank you for this ❤
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Thank you. And thanks for the inspiration!
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You’re welcome. This is quite an honour.
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😉
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Wow, these two pieces are just epic. I am done for the night haha.
Amazing work!
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Well thank you so much!!
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You have created literary classics here, set in the same universe, indelibly linked and unmistakably beautiful. 😊
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Thank you so much!
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😊
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Reblogged this on A Forum for Divergent Literature.
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Thank you! I so appreciate it 🙂
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WOW
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Reblogged this on Solitude In Silence and commented:
A whole world of emotions in this writing..amazing
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Thank you I am very honored!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is gloriously dark and gut punches you discreetly so the pain lasts but slowly dissipates. I hope that made sense.
I’m off to read more
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Oh my! Thank you!!
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My pleasure
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