those steel cages
they lowered the bar
along with the boom
now I limbo under
sub-basement expectations
while my anticipations –
once tenacious
if not effervescent –
sink
in their cement shoes.
those concertina’d fences
they sliced the ligaments
tethering light under my feet
now I stoop under
chains draped across
crumpled wings
while aspirations fizzle,
fireworks damped
in grey drizzling doubt.
“you will never…”
they swore under oath
razing fledgling sprouts of inspiration
straining toward Siberian sun
ad absurdum.
now I excavate cremated élan
sifting through visions in ruins
while I put the lie
to their premature obituary
stargaze with impunity
dare to dream again.
This is a good, sophisticated poem.
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Thank you. I appreciate that
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Yes! Dare, and you’re just the one to do it!
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Thank you Ward
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Breath-taking Aurora. Wonderfully so!
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Thank you Eric!!
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breathtakingly written. thank you for these words
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Thank you! I really appreciate it!
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